Today I am going to make a fish. My fish is going to look beautiful. I am going to race it in the hall. I went to the hall. I was the winner. I had fun there. My fish went very fast! Do you know how it did win? The word card made the wind. My fish blew like the wind.
What a fantastic story Christopher. I really like how you wrote your story over two days. I also liked how you added interest to your story by using a question. Well done!!