Check out Room 21's awesome independent writing. Some is factual with a bit of fiction as it was "Make up Monday" 

Hot Air Balloons

I saw a hot air balloon. There was fire on a stand thing. There was three sacks on the side full of sand. My mum and my dad and two brothers and my sister went. My dad controlled the balloon. We all hopped in and flew to the sky. 

By Lachlan

Hot Air Balloons

Hot air balloons go up,up,up and up. Hot air balloons are tremendous. Hot air balloons are very exciting. Hot air balloons are wonderful. Hot air balloons are fabulous. Hot air balloons are amazing. Hot air balloons are beautiful. I love balloons. Do you love balloons?

By Hope

Hot Air Balloons

The balloons went up and up and up. They were amazing balloons.

I like the balloons. It was fun to see them.

By Shayma

Hot Air Balloons

Today I saw the hot air balloons. The balloons went up and up. I like the exciting balloons. It was amazing. It was fabulous. It was cool. It was fun. I like the balloons. 

By Eunice

The Balloons

I like balloons because they fly over my house. They go high in the sky. Do you know how a balloon gets up in the sky? It has fire to make it go up in the sky. I love balloons. Do you? Balloons are the coolest thing in the world. Don't you think?

By Aria

A huge thank you to the parents that were able to attend our Math open day. We enjoyed showing you  some of the activities we do during Maths sessions. Here are some of our stories about our maths open day.

Welcome Parents
By Bella
Today was the maths open day. All the parents came over and we have a new boy.


Maths Open Day
By Shelby
Today I saw parents come.
It was amazing.
I had fun.

Welcome Parents
By Alena
Today it is maths open day.
Mummy came to watch maths open day.
I liked it.

Maths Open Day
By Quinn
Today it was fun because our parents came over to see our good work.

Maths Open Day
By Luke R
My mum did not go but Aries mum did not come and Aria's mum did come.

Maths Open Day
By Luke H
Today the parents came and watched us.

Maths Open Day
By Shayma
My mum is here.
Mum watched me and not my sister.

 The Gully
By Trinity
I went to the gully with my buddy and I heard a noise.
What a lovely sentence Trinity. I like that you wrote this sentence all by yourself.

 The Gully
By Lachlan
Today our buddy class came over. We went to the gully. The river was as fast as a rocket ship. I felt stones on my shoes. My buddy didn't wear shoes because he didn't bring his shoes. There was a big bridge. There was a river underneath.
What a long story Lachlan. I love how you included a simile.

 The Gully
By Zeb
I saw leaves crunching around me and I felt the sun on me. I heard cicadas. They were as loud as an elephant.
Zeb your story is fabulous. I love how you included a fantastic simile.

Well done Quinn. I love how neat your Mathematics book is. I know you are focusing on keeping your work tidy as well as doing fantastic Math.

THE GULLY
BY James
Today me and my buddy class went down to the gully.
I heard a cicada. I smelt leaves. I saw a birds nest.
It was exciting. It was fun, so, so much fun.