Check out Room 21's awesome independent writing. Some is factual with a bit of fiction as it was "Make up Monday" 

Hot Air Balloons

I saw a hot air balloon. There was fire on a stand thing. There was three sacks on the side full of sand. My mum and my dad and two brothers and my sister went. My dad controlled the balloon. We all hopped in and flew to the sky. 

By Lachlan

Hot Air Balloons

Hot air balloons go up,up,up and up. Hot air balloons are tremendous. Hot air balloons are very exciting. Hot air balloons are wonderful. Hot air balloons are fabulous. Hot air balloons are amazing. Hot air balloons are beautiful. I love balloons. Do you love balloons?

By Hope

Hot Air Balloons

The balloons went up and up and up. They were amazing balloons.

I like the balloons. It was fun to see them.

By Shayma

Hot Air Balloons

Today I saw the hot air balloons. The balloons went up and up. I like the exciting balloons. It was amazing. It was fabulous. It was cool. It was fun. I like the balloons. 

By Eunice

The Balloons

I like balloons because they fly over my house. They go high in the sky. Do you know how a balloon gets up in the sky? It has fire to make it go up in the sky. I love balloons. Do you? Balloons are the coolest thing in the world. Don't you think?

By Aria