Tuesday 10 March 2015

 The Gully
By Trinity
I went to the gully with my buddy and I heard a noise.
What a lovely sentence Trinity. I like that you wrote this sentence all by yourself.
 The Gully
By Lachlan
Today our buddy class came over. We went to the gully. The river was as fast as a rocket ship. I felt stones on my shoes. My buddy didn't wear shoes because he didn't bring his shoes. There was a big bridge. There was a river underneath.
What a long story Lachlan. I love how you included a simile.
 The Gully
By Zeb
I saw leaves crunching around me and I felt the sun on me. I heard cicadas. They were as loud as an elephant.
Zeb your story is fabulous. I love how you included a fantastic simile.
Well done Quinn. I love how neat your Mathematics book is. I know you are focusing on keeping your work tidy as well as doing fantastic Math.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 March 2015 at 21:26

    Good job room 21☺⛄

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  2. Anonymous18 March 2015 at 00:26

    This writing is fabulous everyone! I can see that you are all working very hard at school this year! Going to the gully is so fun isn't it!! I hope you looked after your teacher!

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